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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 6, 2020 21:35:05 GMT -5
Planet Topaz (Book 1): Topaz ice bears.
Summary:
There is a planet called Topaz with cyan sea, bluish white sky, and teal soil. In the soil are topaz precious stones of different colours. That planet looks similar to the now destroyed planet Diamond but it is only has a gravity pull 80 times stronger than that of planet Earth.
The male and female animals have different colours just like the dragonflies on earth.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 6, 2020 21:42:03 GMT -5
Prologue.
The last male blue ice bear caused an explosion destroying planet Diamond and its solar system forever.
In another solar system far away, a cyan planet which is the fifth rock from a white Star is filled with life that would be present on earth. Some of them having a similar colour to these on planet Diamond but with one difference, the male and female of every kind of animal has a different colour and that includes the topaz ice bears of the north.
Like the male blue ice bears which are the strongest land animals in the universe, the male topaz ice bears are the strongest land animals on their planet.
This story will focus on them. The male topaz ice bears are the exact same colour as the male blue ice bears except that it bleeds cyan while the latter bleeds neon blue.
Female topaz ice bears unlike their female blue ice bears are white rather than neon blue.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 2:25:09 GMT -5
Chapter 1:Mating season.
It is mating season in the Topaz North Pole on the cyan arctic sea shore. Neon blue giants more than four times the weight of Stan are fighting violently for the right to mate.
A young but fully grown neon blue victor now bleeding cyan followed a white female, three times smaller than himself to a far away place to mate, fighting off more rival males along the way.
In spite of the violence and cyan blood visible on the ground, all the neon blue males got to mate.
Under the setting white sun, the young male neon blue topaz ice bear enjoyed a romantic evening with his smaller white mate for weeks before their romance was over. Both parted ways, the male to the sea and the female into a snowy cave to give birth to his cubs.
A/N: Please feel free to give me your feedbacks. I am still trying to master my ‘show don’t tell skills’.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 2:29:19 GMT -5
Chapter 2: Two cubs were born.
The four tonne male topaz ice bear headed to the sea where he will hunt walrus and seals.
In the meantime, the last blue star disappeared from the sky mysteriously.
The woolly mammoths and rhinos have migrated down south. The male topaz ice bear killed a bull musk oxen and feasted while waiting for the sea to freeze.
The female was still looking for a place to sleep where she will soon be covered in snow.
The snow finally came and covered the female where she shortly gave birth to two cubs. The smaller but older one was a female and the larger but younger one was a neon blue male.
The female white topaz ice bear stayed in the snowy cyan den for three months. During that time, she does not eat at all but her cubs live on the milk while she
lives off the 50% fat she has put on.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 2:48:43 GMT -5
Chapter 3: A spectacular kill.
The male blue topaz ice bear kills a bull walrus which came up for breathing with a well placed paw swipe on its head. The bull walruses weighed up to eight tonnes, way larger than the walrus on earth.
A/N: A male topaz ice bear has similar pound to pound strength as a male blue ice bear which exceeds that of earth’s polar bear.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 2:51:15 GMT -5
Chapter 4: Adventurous female cub.
The more lively and adventurous female white cub attempted to leave the den but was forbidden by her protective mother.
The larger and quieter neon blue male cub remain asleep.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 3:09:46 GMT -5
Chapter 5: Winter is over.
Breaking out of the cyan snowy den, the female white topaz ice bear led her cubs out to enjoy the fresh air. She has already lost 30% of her body weight.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 3:18:20 GMT -5
Chapter 6: An invasion.
The snow began to melt, the musk oxen, woolly mammoths, woolly rhinos, and other animals such as the foxes and wolves returned to the North Pole.
However, green smilodon fatalis prides followed them up north.
The bright green smilodon populators used their dark powers to teleport themselves to the north.
They killed many animals but avoided the pachyderms.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 3:22:57 GMT -5
Chapter 7: The return of the male topaz ice bears.
One female white ice bear was killed together with her two female cubs.
The female white ice bear and her two cubs of different colours were surrounded by a pride of smilodon populators.
The male neon blue cubs rose to the occasion and bit the leader of the smilodon populator in the nose after hitting his left canine with his paws which were almost as big as these of his mother.
The bright green leader of the smilodon populator pride was about to retaliate but he was knocked down by a powerful force. That force came from the male blue topaz ice bear.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 3:23:44 GMT -5
Chapter 8: Driving out the enemies of the north pole.
The male blue topaz ice bear rushed towards the green smilodon populator leader and bit it own the neck and breaking it with a powerful shake.
The rest of the smilodon populators and fatalis tried to flee but some of them were block and trampled by the cyan woolly mammoths and rhinos.
The male neon blue topaz grizzly bears and Eurasian blue topaz bears killed the smilodon’s which tried to escape the North Pole.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 3:25:29 GMT -5
Chapter 9: The male blue topaz ice bear cub.
The following spring, the male topaz ice bear cub grew slightly larger than his mother. His white sister still smaller than his mother.
Both cubs are now able to hunt for themselves now.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 3:26:01 GMT -5
Chapter 10: Leaving his mother.
Winter finally came, the male cub and his sister saw their mother mating with a much larger male blue topaz ice bear and knew it was time for them to go their merry way.
Winter finally arrived and both sisters headed towards the ice pack as soon as the water froze.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 7:20:21 GMT -5
theundertaker45, could you help me make a size comparison between my 4 tonne blue topaz ice bear and an eight tonne cyan woolly mammoth please?
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 7:27:53 GMT -5
Chapter 11: On the ice pack.
The two topaz ice bear siblings played together. They bump into a large male blue topaz ice bear which happened to be their father.
The cubs were amazed at the strength of their father who killed a large male bull walrus and actually shared the kill with his cubs.
The names of the cubs are Stanley (younger blue male) and Winnie (older female cub).
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 7:30:09 GMT -5
Chapter 12: Their first hunt.
After receiving advise, their father departed leaving Stanley and his older sister to their own devices.
The cubs decided to do their own hunting. Stanley caught and killed a female purple bearded seal while Winnie killed a small cyan ringed seal.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 7:31:38 GMT -5
Chapter 13: Playing.
After eating, the cubs decided to continue their play time.
The cyan ice is slippery but their cyan claws enabled them to hold on to the ice.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 7:33:57 GMT -5
Chapter 14: Parting ways.
Two and a half years later, Winnie reached sexual maturity and was no longer interested in their infantile games. Instead she participated in the mating season and mated with a neon blue topaz grizzly bear.
Stanley was left on his own to hunt.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 7:36:58 GMT -5
Chapter 15: Sexual maturity.
A year later, Stanley reaches sexual maturity. An older female white topaz grizzly bear flirted with him and he mated with her.
After a few weeks of romance, they parted ways. He is not strong enough to compete with the more mature male topaz ice bears, young male topaz ice bears usually mate with an older white female topaz grizzly.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 7:41:04 GMT -5
Chapter 16:Back to the ice.
Stanley headed back to the ice pack. He is now able to hunt animals up to the size of a bull walrus.
For the next two years, he mated with older female white topaz grizzlies as he was still not strong enough to compete with the more mature males.
A/N: If you find unrealistic elements, take note this is a fictional story on a fictional planet.
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Post by OldGreenGrolar on Dec 7, 2020 7:42:03 GMT -5
Chapter 17: Fully grown.
Four years later, Stanley reached his maximum weight of four tonnes. Larger than most male blue topaz ice bears, he is now able to participate in the official mating season.
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